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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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I have to say I love the outcome of the head. It looks really nice. Good muzzle, nice shape structure, signature eyes as well. The ears look really nice too. The perfect size and shape. Great job there. The head needs no changing nor improvement.
Moving on, the shape of the body is really nice as well. The legs and joints are anatomically right, as usual. You've seemed to have perfected a really nice pattern for them, indeed. Nice job.
The only critique I have now is the neck. The angle that it is to the body seems to take a 75 degree turn to it's back. Anatomically speaking, the neck should be at more of a...perhaps 40 degree angle? There should be evidence of a chest as well from a profile view. I admit, that a pattern like so would be terribly hard to work out, but then again, this is the only thing I think you could improve on. Everything else is fine.
To state my point in a clearer way, I blue-lined the corrections onto the photo. I hope you don't mind.
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As for further comments. I really like the way you created the tail. Very nice feet. The paws also "ploop" when it presses to the ground. It's a very cute effect and I like it very much.
and for the front on view picture, he looks very cute. I love the way the muzzle is shaped. The eyes are done beautifully as stated before. He looks adorable.
Yeah, now I'm done. I hope my critiques aren't overly harsh or anything. Just trying to help out.
Oh and as a random fact, you've really improved a lot since your first one. Your wolf's heads have become more wolfish. The ears and proportions have gotten much better to. Same thing with your construction. I'm starting at the first Kiba plush you've made and comparing it with this one and you can very easily see the improvement that you've accomplished. Your style has changed a rather lot too. Definite improvement in anatomy as well. Just wanted to let you know. ^_^